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Refulgent (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Deep in the southern hemisphere a lighthouse, clutching earth touches space. Its Fresnal lenses have fallen away and the strobe hangles with a million candela splintering the universe.

Jill Stockinger 29-Dec-20/4:04 PM
Lovely use of the word hangles (to hang from a hook...)
I would remove the comma between lighthouse and clutching- no comma needed. Beautiful poem. Really well done.




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