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6.387 seconds (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Coughing Snorting Hissing Spitting Groaning Growling Rumbling Creeping Lurching Teasing Taunting Waiting Straining Hold Hold FLASH! STOMPINGBELLOWING! TWISTINGTORQUING! LAUNCHINGPOUNDING! GRABBINGLIFTING! QUAKING EARTH! SHIFTING! HURLING! SPEEDING! FLYING! RUSHING! ROARING! TRYING! EDGING! flash flash shutdown release slowing coasting dragging frowning smiling face time next time.......

Up the ladder: What R U?
Down the ladder: I love your pink little bow

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.7
Overall Rank: 1953
Posted: January 7, 2003 6:51 AM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2003 6:51 AM PST
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Comments:
[8] vulcan @ 80.242.3.90 | 7-Jan-03/8:02 AM | Reply
interestiong!8
[8] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 7-Jan-03/8:19 AM | Reply
Dramatic, and the ending....cool ! *8*
[9] Owner of the Sky @ 61.9.0.100 | 7-Jan-03/10:36 AM | Reply
I saw a bullfight while reading this Rich! :D A 9 because. ;o)

How have you been?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > Owner of the Sky | 7-Jan-03/3:27 PM | Reply
Not what I was going for but thanks for the observation! Always useful to hear what others (see).
[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Jan-03/10:46 AM | Reply
o-60.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > Bachus | 7-Jan-03/2:40 PM | Reply
Yes, but that would be a little slow. by,oh,say,200.
[7] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 8-Jan-03/8:52 AM | Reply
the adrenaline rush on the edge of control.
[8] Jill Stockinger @ 127.0.0.1 | 29-Dec-20/4:08 PM | Reply
I think the rocketship Almost took off but failed. Liked the concrete imagery.
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