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6.387 seconds (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Coughing Snorting Hissing Spitting Groaning Growling Rumbling Creeping Lurching Teasing Taunting Waiting Straining Hold Hold FLASH! STOMPINGBELLOWING! TWISTINGTORQUING! LAUNCHINGPOUNDING! GRABBINGLIFTING! QUAKING EARTH! SHIFTING! HURLING! SPEEDING! FLYING! RUSHING! ROARING! TRYING! EDGING! flash flash shutdown release slowing coasting dragging frowning smiling face time next time.......

INTRANSIT 7-Jan-03/3:27 PM
Not what I was going for but thanks for the observation! Always useful to hear what others (see).




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