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inside me (Other) by cherish
i cover my eyes so you wont feel my pain, and so you wont even try to see it

Down the ladder: vent tent

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.571429
Weighted score: 4.8847394
Overall Rank: 9930
Posted: January 6, 2003 3:49 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2003 3:49 PM PST
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[8] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 7-Jan-03/1:52 AM | Reply
Not bad. Hits hard for a three-liner.
[n/a] cherish @ 68.51.210.55 > Ranger | 8-Jan-03/4:38 PM | Reply
thank you so much
[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 7-Jan-03/8:49 AM | Reply
I was hoping for filth and got this purity ------huh ? its good though as ranger says it says a lot with so little -7-
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.155 | 7-Jan-03/9:58 AM | Reply
you could always gouge out your eyes with an electric mixer. problem solved!
[n/a] cherish @ 68.51.210.55 > razorgrin | 8-Jan-03/4:36 PM | Reply
maybe i will try that next time lol
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.155 | 7-Jan-03/10:00 AM | Reply
you should write something more intersting about things inside you. Nachos, intestinal bacteria, government tracking implants, rapidly forming pimples, herpes, a mcdonald's toy you ate when you were 4, no less than six separate penises...
[n/a] cherish @ 68.51.210.55 > razorgrin | 8-Jan-03/4:37 PM | Reply
ok...
[n/a] BrandonW @ 172.140.20.211 | 11-Jan-03/8:15 PM | Reply
Damnit.. hoping for filth also
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