| Re: Summer by MaliqaTara |
8-Sep-03/7:04 PM |
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What happened? You seemed so happy.
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| Re: Plum diggity by tadpole |
8-Sep-03/10:52 AM |
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My tastebuds swoon in anticipation, where to find these tasty morsels?
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| Re: a comment on 'Till Then by sliver |
8-Sep-03/10:39 AM |
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Thank you Tadpole, Your response proves that I hit my mark. Much appreciated.
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| Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig |
5-Sep-03/8:27 PM |
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I like it, I see now why it rates so high. kudos
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| Re: Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme |
3-Sep-03/4:25 PM |
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You are most assuredly a sick fuck,Rot in hell with your jizz crusted crap.
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| Re: The One and Only by J.B. Manning |
3-Sep-03/4:21 PM |
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Sounds like Eminem on an off day.
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| Re: Curiously here by philthegreek |
3-Sep-03/4:19 PM |
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Personally I enjoyed the part about the fresh young girl,other than that, well...
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| Re: none by tadpole |
3-Sep-03/11:56 AM |
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Good rhythm. i really like this. Let's see some more 1
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| Re: Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend |
3-Sep-03/7:38 AM |
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A vivid picture of a place I'm sure I've been, I just can't remember when.
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| Re: #2 Entry from Chico, a stalker on Pico, Jason Bigg's lobster by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Sep-03/7:26 AM |
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Chico has issues big ones
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| Re: R.O.X. by InvertedEar |
3-Sep-03/7:23 AM |
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I don't know about erotic, but it's a great song. She always makes good music eh?
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| Re: The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
3-Sep-03/7:19 AM |
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Not too shabby, I especially like the third stanza, the scooter...
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| Re: a comment on Carry You Inside by sliver |
2-Sep-03/8:39 AM |
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Let's see one of yours tadpole.
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| Re: a comment on Carry You Inside by sliver |
2-Sep-03/8:37 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Between Now And Then by sliver |
2-Sep-03/8:35 AM |
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Exactly what I felt when I wrote it. Thank you.
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| Re: Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8 |
21-Aug-03/8:46 PM |
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Try putting your points in your slits and slots and quit writing about your sister. This sucked
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| Re: A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 |
18-Aug-03/7:44 PM |
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You know what the difference is between this submission and a bucket of shit? The bucket buddy. But keep trying, I enjoy a good laugh
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
15-Aug-03/9:08 PM |
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You forgot to add me to your list. I've rhymed Heart/apart etc. but we all grow
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| Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
15-Aug-03/6:09 PM |
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Why the 's in the third stanza? You had a good flow 'till then.
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| Re: (The vinyards of Tuscany) by Patsy |
15-Aug-03/6:03 PM |
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Sounds almost like Rome after Nero
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