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Between Now And Then (Free verse) by sliver Grieve not for my mortal shell
Lying far beneath this stone
I am no longer there
My Lord has taken me home.
If you wish to speak to me
Just turn your tearful eyes
My earthly labours are finished
I'm at my Saviors side
So keep your gaze on the Heavens
Until we meet again
And know that I'll be praying for you
Between now and then
Up the ladder:
Bloody sins of mind
Down the ladder:
regrets
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Posted: August 10, 2003 2:39 PM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2003 2:39 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.651152 Overall Rank: 2115 Comments:
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sliver @ 63.190.65.171
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10-Aug-03/2:40 PM
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Dedicated to my father. May he rest in peace.
Line 8 should say "Savior's side"
Thank you. What do you think of the content?
Shucks, you caught me trying to skip away without addressing the subject. Honestly, I am athiest, so I couldn't really relate. But it is a nice thing to write to your father, and a nice way to talk about grief.
This poem makes me happy and tearful all at the same time.
Exactly what I felt when I wrote it. Thank you.
How come this one is so low? I LOVE this poem! Its might favorite of yours!
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