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Bloody sins of mind (Free verse) by RosiePosie
Love?s tempting ways Pull you under a spell That love itself entraps.
Craving the need The physical touch Artificial sweetener for a
wound that never heals.
Don?t rain on my parade Tell not the sun
That it burns too bright,
For the moon In her darkened beauty
Whispers sweet forgiveness.
Fear?s a snake Coils and fangs, ready to
strike Your unwavering stare.
The seed is planted Grievous deceit
Of a guiltless perpetrator
Learn it, live it Crisp air of your
retreat In the shadows I wait.
Cut my skin Sharpen the blade No
pain?s worse than the unchangeable.
Twist the knife My open heart
Awaken agony of that love.
Accept it or die I live in the pain
Knowledge keys the ache of sin.
Forgiveness of innocent And crimes
that bleed From these beautiful wounds.
Tell me this That loves
sweet kiss Will not be the death of me.
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Overall Rank: 2114
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST
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