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Plum diggity

by tadpole

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Sep 2003 · 8 comments

Vivid crimson, bleeding heart, sliced in half, and sugared sweet. Violet melting, gently pressed into a smooth rich batter seat. Light and soft, not quite crumbly, sticky moist, Turn up the heat! Aroma piercing, senses sharp, tastebuds met their match, concede defeat.

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8 comments

[5] J.B. Manning 4-Sep-03/4:53 PM Reply
hmmmmm
[5] Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Sep-03/5:25 PM Reply
A staggering wok of manure.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Sep-03/5:31 PM Reply
A steaming portion of Dung Po, I daresay. *chortle*
[n/a] tadpole › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Sep-03/7:31 PM Reply
you wouldn't say that if you tasted it
[10] electroman1979 4-Sep-03/9:52 PM Reply
good, i liked it, great imagination, breaks away from the routine poem :D
[8] sliver 8-Sep-03/10:52 AM Reply
My tastebuds swoon in anticipation, where to find these tasty morsels?
[n/a] tadpole › sliver 14-Sep-03/7:18 AM Reply
Well it is usually found only around this time of year
Furthermore, you profile indicates that you could find some near
. . .
[9] Katzclear 2-Nov-03/2:18 PM Reply
At first I got nothing out of it... but then I found that I was wondering what it was you were describing so I must have liked it ^.^