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Its raining

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 May 2004 · 9 comments

Its raining again I knew it would Fat droplets stain my cheeks Marking my face Its raining again Always this time of year The seasons revolt and bring the rain That washes over me The rain storms Today I cannot withstand its force Take my boyfriend My friends and my comfort away And then expect me to stand I am paralyzed-it engulfs me Why canât you hold me? Tell me what to do And Iâll smile though my tears

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[9] Sasha 10-May-04/4:08 PM Reply

A bit sappy but alright.

[8] Shuushin 10-May-04/7:09 PM Reply

"The rain storms" delete "rain"; not too shabby. Stays I think to the right side of pimple - but only barely.

What else u got? Fire it up.

[8] wilco › Shuushin 10-May-04/7:38 PM Reply

What are we firing up? I got some shit the other day that....oh....wait....nevermind...what?

[8] wilco 10-May-04/7:39 PM Reply

Not enough cursing to really be a pimple....

[n/a] caitydee 10-May-04/9:30 PM Reply

sorry Silver-I accidentally erased your comment-( meant to reply questioning it-you can put it back up if you would like!

[7] sliver › caitydee 2-Jun-04/8:25 PM Reply

Can't remember it, I'm sure it was just me saying something nice. By the way, it's sliver, not silver.

[n/a] caitydee › sliver 2-Jun-04/8:49 PM Reply

Actually I think it was something mean haha, but its ok, thanks for the comments on the other poems.

[7] sliver › caitydee 2-Jun-04/9:04 PM Reply

Come on, it couldn't have been that bad.

[6] SupremeDreamer 19-Jun-04/12:09 AM Reply

Over-all, the rain theme isn't very strong, and the ending didn't help that much at all-- reminded me of something that would be penned by a highschool girlie.

Blessed with six.