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Its raining (Free verse) by caitydee

Its raining again I knew it would Fat droplets stain my cheeks Marking my face Its raining again Always this time of year The seasons revolt and bring the rain That washes over me The rain storms Today I cannot withstand its force Take my boyfriend My friends and my comfort away And then expect me to stand I am paralyzed-it engulfs me Why can’t you hold me? Tell me what to do And I’ll smile though my tears

caitydee 10-May-04/9:30 PM
sorry Silver-I accidentally erased your comment-( meant to reply questioning it-you can put it back up if you would like!




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