Replying to a comment on:

Plum diggity (Free verse) by tadpole

Vivid crimson, bleeding heart, sliced in half, and sugared sweet. Violet melting, gently pressed into a smooth rich batter seat. Light and soft, not quite crumbly, sticky moist, Turn up the heat! Aroma piercing, senses sharp, tastebuds met their match, concede defeat.

electroman1979 4-Sep-03/9:52 PM
good, i liked it, great imagination, breaks away from the routine poem :D




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001