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A ballerina bubble bath (Sestina) by horus8
I love to watch the young girls dance from my window. Observing through my telescope as a man of leisure. Clearly, not your average bored voyeur by any ordinary means. You see I have a job to do here & it's murder. My problem is not that I'm a pervert, or a psychopath. Only that I need a ballerina when I take a bubble bath. Stemming from this dream of me 'nuding' in a birdbath. 'Nuding' is getting naked with a motive by a window. Someplace easily visible, to lure you your own psycho, but not forced nudity, more at one's pace & leisurity. That, coupled by the fact I'm anal retentive, is murder in the first degree, but made to seem quite ordinary. I know it's a tremendous burden being so extraordinary when it comes to discovering new components for my bath. Cleaning, and grooming, would be useless without murder. There's just too much inspiration outside of my window. Begging to be shown a thrilling kill, set by my leisure. I will rewrite the definition of the West's best psycho. I am out to create the most lethal invisible Neopsycho, the world has ever tried to pigeonhole as unordinary. The pleasure of dying for me? Is a vacation of leisure. Kind of like how I feel after a ballerina bubble bath. Everyone’ll pay to let me see 'them' through my window. We can even sell tickets to my dinner shows of murdero. I know what you're thinking, "What's with him & murder?" Maybe this guy is really a "Sociopath or a real psycho?" Because, I can read minds through bars, flesh, or window, & I can turn your last days alive into something ordinary. With a gift horse's mouth, beware my tempting bubble baths. I want you to be drawn in, but only if you come leisurely. Passive aggressive manipulation accommodates leisure. My best asset's when it comes to the art form of murder. I often go through many ballerinas for a proper bath, and this by all means is the joy of being a psychopath. The immense pride taken in being so normal & ordinary. That & having so many beautiful clean rearview windows. Such is this life of leisure behind every great psychopath. A perfect murder should always be slow, simple and ordinary Take a chance on a ballerina's last dance, and bubble bath.


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6086955
Weighted score: 6.5797615
Overall Rank: 627
Posted: August 18, 2003 12:55 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2003 5:50 PM PDT
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 18-Aug-03/12:58 PM | Reply
In your efforts to be psychopathic, you are only homeopathic. I understand this, I relate, I also worry where your ass-hairs will crawl next.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > deleted user | 18-Aug-03/1:01 PM | Reply
My bum is nared, and I need not try very hard. The secret has been shared. As you were care beared, to death.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 66.52.157.242 | 18-Aug-03/1:45 PM | Reply
wheres the ultra violence? lol. 9
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 18-Aug-03/1:56 PM | Reply
Look between her legs. The Femoral artery has been opened and a tube has been inserted. Love my friend, Now that's love.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 66.52.157.216 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 18-Aug-03/2:11 PM | Reply
eh... ok man.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 18-Aug-03/2:58 PM | Reply
COME ON!!!!!!! LIVE MAN! LIVE! IT'S FUCKING MURDER! AND IT'S FUCKING FREE!!!!!! FREE! DON'T YOU FEEL THE FREE LOVE!? IN MURDERING.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 66.52.157.216 > horus8 | 18-Aug-03/3:01 PM | Reply
im not into murder.. im a care bear.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 18-Aug-03/3:06 PM | Reply
Wheel, you're still a pup. Your time will coma.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 66.52.157.216 > horus8 | 18-Aug-03/3:35 PM | Reply
im a lover not a fighter. ;/
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 18-Aug-03/4:59 PM | Reply
_O/ <3 <3
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_(o)\_ I wanted to blow you some kisses.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 63.93.98.153 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 18-Aug-03/5:02 PM | Reply
are you trying to goad me into commiting murder? ;/ how evil.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 18-Aug-03/5:34 PM | Reply
Yes and yes. B======D---------

I'm a straight shooter.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 63.93.98.153 > horus8 | 18-Aug-03/5:56 PM | Reply
... whats the big deal horus? i dont want to kill.. thats merciful.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 18-Aug-03/6:16 PM | Reply
I want you to kill me. Give yourelf a chrystal meth enima, red eye a flight out, and do me dead with a burnt bent smack spoon... Please, kill me.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 63.93.98.153 > horus8 | 18-Aug-03/6:26 PM | Reply
gimme the address and ill kill you with a needle injection..
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 18-Aug-03/2:59 PM | Reply
IN EHR..AQ. lol, get it?
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 18-Aug-03/6:18 PM | Reply
Turn on your black light.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 63.93.98.153 > horus8 | 18-Aug-03/6:29 PM | Reply
its been on 24/7 for the whole week. ;P
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 18-Aug-03/2:47 PM | Reply
things stuck inside bum part 2

why is my bum
hanging there
and taking notes
bum says
i am not hanging here
taking notes
that is
your scrotum.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Aug-03/3:04 PM | Reply
Oh lordy someone gave me a zero. Darnit, that was poopy of them P{> (I am a pirate with an whitey powered eye patch) lol.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Aug-03/4:38 PM | Reply
Look horatio, now you have one poopy blue welsh vote and a poopy blue government fag vote. I see you poopies and I think your blue votes are poopy. So now I will perform for you my yawn of poop =:0> Now wasn't that entertaining?
[1] sliver @ 65.178.208.32 | 18-Aug-03/7:44 PM | Reply
You know what the difference is between this submission and a bucket of shit? The bucket buddy. But keep trying, I enjoy a good laugh
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > sliver | 18-Aug-03/8:23 PM | Reply
Oh, i'm sorry, I didn't know you knew what a sestina was? That's intersting.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > sliver | 18-Aug-03/8:24 PM | Reply
"The bucket buddy" Care to elaborate?
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > sliver | 22-Aug-03/5:24 PM | Reply
You know for an old woman, you say buddy just like a guy (but gay and jewish with a toupee) with a mouthfull of pennys.
[n/a] w~* ATHENA *~w @ 64.12.96.237 | 18-Aug-03/8:57 PM | Reply
leisurity is not a word, it is a frame from a woody allen movie.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > w~* ATHENA *~w | 18-Aug-03/9:36 PM | Reply
Your face isn't a word, but if it was... it would be Splurtah.
[10] suprembeaner @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Sep-03/4:33 AM | Reply
personally i like to take fat butcher buble baths.
3char1per
10.
[8] Sasha @ 69.140.246.96 | 14-Apr-04/9:20 PM | Reply
GOOD! One of the very few poems on PoemRanker that is actually worth reading! Shortening of the lines would make it more immediate in effect and impact
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