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Bury Me at Dead Man's Point

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Sep 2003 · 7 comments

The Great Fire of 1911; When it came Many fled to the mines, Most took to the lake. Behind me that historic "they" nurture the regions greenest lawn, And I stand at the precipice where birches and pines open like theatre drapes to reveal the imprint of their panicked finger-curls, truncated breaths, upon each of the Porcupine's endless ghastly crests. They could not have known this twig would sprout belated from their ashes And pay peculiar homage that I am allowed their company. Here at Dead Man's Point I used to cast for pike. Here I witnessed the planets allign with young friends and contraband. Here I sought and found the ruins of my shipwreck when I was finally (un)grounded. I walk this earth in loving fear But, when I rest let it be here.

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[7] SupremeDreamer 3-Sep-03/7:27 AM Reply
Well.. kinda lost me someplaces, then took hold of me again.. 7.
[8] sliver 3-Sep-03/7:38 AM Reply
A vivid picture of a place I'm sure I've been, I just can't remember when.
[n/a] EAger to Offend › sliver 3-Sep-03/11:21 PM Reply
...coming west on Highway 11 take a left on the "dirt road" at the bottom of "the hill", and watch closely for the iron gates at the end of a solitary road to the right...
[10] Bill Z Bub 3-Sep-03/8:39 PM Reply
And curse you sir, for writing a better poem. But I am currently reworking mine, and it shall resurface here...
Too many similarities... must rewrite... >:/

ten, for splitting my arrow.
[n/a] EAger to Offend › Bill Z Bub 3-Sep-03/11:13 PM Reply
Shit! I just deleted your last message by mistake. It's too bad cause I split my gut at the coincidences. Were you going to include anything about the "wildman" that lurks on the back road too? I couldn't really fit it into the script or emotion.
I can't wait to read your "version". Not looking forward to being beaten at my own poem , though. Please post what you have for me. I'd love to see those freaky similarities!
[7] <~> 4-Sep-03/9:21 AM Reply
cool.
[10] Bill Z Bub 4-Sep-03/1:58 PM Reply
I was shocked to see this poem. Shocked that anyone here besides me would know about Porcupine Lake, Dead Man's Point and the Great Fire.
I even posted a poem last week (now deleted) that referenced these. And to see a poem with this title...
I have often said to my old friends from South End that I want my ashes scattered at Dead Man's Point, on a night when the Northern Lights are snaking through the sky...
Aw, the memories of fishing for pike, running the trail, exploring the bush, with my Connaught Hill gang...