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Bury Me at Dead Man's Point (Free verse) by EAger to Offend
The Great Fire of 1911;
When it came
Many fled to the mines,
Most took to the lake.
Behind me that historic "they"
nurture the regions greenest lawn,
And I stand at the precipice
where birches and pines open like theatre drapes
to reveal the imprint of
their panicked finger-curls,
truncated breaths,
upon each of the Porcupine's
endless ghastly crests.
They could not have known this twig would sprout
belated from their ashes
And pay peculiar homage
that I am allowed their
company.
Here at Dead Man's Point
I used to cast for pike.
Here I witnessed the planets allign
with young friends and contraband.
Here I sought and found the ruins of my shipwreck
when I was finally (un)grounded.
I walk this earth in loving fear
But, when I rest let it be here.
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Overall Rank: 3539
Posted: September 3, 2003 7:22 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2003 7:22 AM PDT
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