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Bury Me at Dead Man's Point (Free verse) by EAger to Offend

The Great Fire of 1911; When it came Many fled to the mines, Most took to the lake. Behind me that historic "they" nurture the regions greenest lawn, And I stand at the precipice where birches and pines open like theatre drapes to reveal the imprint of their panicked finger-curls, truncated breaths, upon each of the Porcupine's endless ghastly crests. They could not have known this twig would sprout belated from their ashes And pay peculiar homage that I am allowed their company. Here at Dead Man's Point I used to cast for pike. Here I witnessed the planets allign with young friends and contraband. Here I sought and found the ruins of my shipwreck when I was finally (un)grounded. I walk this earth in loving fear But, when I rest let it be here.

Bill Z Bub 4-Sep-03/1:58 PM
I was shocked to see this poem. Shocked that anyone here besides me would know about Porcupine Lake, Dead Man's Point and the Great Fire.
I even posted a poem last week (now deleted) that referenced these. And to see a poem with this title...
I have often said to my old friends from South End that I want my ashes scattered at Dead Man's Point, on a night when the Northern Lights are snaking through the sky...
Aw, the memories of fishing for pike, running the trail, exploring the bush, with my Connaught Hill gang...




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