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The One and Only (Free verse) by J.B. Manning I know you want to flesh me
Suck and then digest me
Fuck and then contest me
Rip and sip and test me
Trying to protest me
But please do not neglect me
Silence or reject me
Before you try and hurt me
When your eyes avert me
Or your friends divert me
And then you all desert me
Know you cannot stop me
Slow my flow or top me
And when you think youâve lost me
Youâll find that youâve not cost me
A thing but finally forced me
To crush who wont endorse me
And Standing Tall will be
The one and only ME
Up the ladder:
Sagadahoc to Hudson
Down the ladder:
Giger cider
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Posted: September 3, 2003 1:00 PM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2003 1:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.96158 Overall Rank: 8532 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.181.134
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3-Sep-03/1:02 PM
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ok. thats cool.
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> SupremeDreamer
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3-Sep-03/1:05 PM
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comments with no vote? ;-)
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.181.134
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3-Sep-03/1:23 PM
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well, i didnt find it worth rating. no offense and all, just my opinion.
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> SupremeDreamer
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3-Sep-03/1:24 PM
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haha ok
Sounds like Eminem on an off day.
the last line is a bit infantile, and destroys the flow.
Other than that it has a rather good lyrical flow, a bit like a rap song. And a rap song about the one and only me is hardly original. But overall quite enjoyable
I appreciate your input, but you know, saying something isn't original is hardly original and really, what IS original? Everything we do has already been done in some form or fashion before...hmmm, seems like a poem in itself. haha.
Original sin is original.
lol - so much religious reference on this site. It should be called holy poem ranker dot com...or some shit. lol
Coming from the spawn of Judas, you would definately know about that.
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