Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

The One and Only (Free verse) by J.B. Manning
I know you want to flesh me Suck and then digest me Fuck and then contest me Rip and sip and test me Trying to protest me But please do not neglect me Silence or reject me Before you try and hurt me When your eyes avert me Or your friends divert me And then you all desert me Know you cannot stop me Slow my flow or top me And when you think you’ve lost me You’ll find that you’ve not cost me A thing but finally forced me To crush who wont endorse me And Standing Tall will be The one and only ME

Up the ladder: Sagadahoc to Hudson
Down the ladder: Giger cider

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 20
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 01
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Weighted score: 4.96158
Overall Rank: 8526
Posted: September 3, 2003 1:00 PM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2003 1:00 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.181.134 | 3-Sep-03/1:02 PM | Reply
ok. thats cool.
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > SupremeDreamer | 3-Sep-03/1:05 PM | Reply
comments with no vote? ;-)
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.181.134 > J.B. Manning | 3-Sep-03/1:23 PM | Reply
well, i didnt find it worth rating. no offense and all, just my opinion.
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > SupremeDreamer | 3-Sep-03/1:24 PM | Reply
haha ok
[4] sliver @ 198.81.26.109 | 3-Sep-03/4:21 PM | Reply
Sounds like Eminem on an off day.
[7] richa @ 81.178.237.184 | 4-Sep-03/7:50 AM | Reply
the last line is a bit infantile, and destroys the flow.

Other than that it has a rather good lyrical flow, a bit like a rap song. And a rap song about the one and only me is hardly original.

But overall quite enjoyable
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > richa | 4-Sep-03/4:18 PM | Reply
I appreciate your input, but you know, saying something isn't original is hardly original and really, what IS original? Everything we do has already been done in some form or fashion before...hmmm, seems like a poem in itself. haha.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.128.25.58 > J.B. Manning | 4-Sep-03/4:25 PM | Reply
Original sin is original.
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 4-Sep-03/4:27 PM | Reply
lol - so much religious reference on this site. It should be called holy poem ranker dot com...or some shit. lol
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.179.229 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 4-Sep-03/7:39 PM | Reply
Coming from the spawn of Judas, you would definately know about that.
[6] jonnyduk @ 217.137.173.89 | 30-Jun-04/4:21 PM | Reply
no comment
226 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001