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Giger cider (Free verse) by grendal
On March tenth I’ll brew some cider, Out will come a living, breathing Giger. Another prodigy on this undeserving earth, Could it be an angel has touched Mary and she hath given birth. Oh know my friends I well tell you why, I found a book and inside… All the secrets of mankind. On page 1,988 it reads to make a prodigy all you need. A death rattle, walrus pubic hair, a picture of medusas stare, iguanas nail, a piece of moby’s tale, witches wart, Hitler’s little millipede, a picture of your favorite prodigy. Is worth the trouble you say. Well you tell me he has ten paintings in a museum and he made five years of age today.

Up the ladder: The One and Only
Down the ladder: Spider Meth Adventure

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Weighted score: 4.96158
Overall Rank: 8527
Posted: September 11, 2003 10:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2003 10:02 PM PDT
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[7] Geschäftsreise @ 4.40.32.229 | 12-Sep-03/9:43 AM | Reply
i enjoyed this (the arbitrary list of ingredients and the final justification could be reworked in order to make this a serious poem)
[n/a] grendal @ 24.126.113.154 > Geschäftsreise | 12-Sep-03/6:56 PM | Reply
No I don't think I'll change it.
I don't want it to be serious,
but if you want I can send you some white out
and you can do it yourself. -- scroll down...
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just kidding
thanks for the
comment, i am
still a grass-
hopper.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Sep-03/3:36 PM | Reply
You are way ahead of your time. for a fifteen year old, this is a remarkable piece.
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