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The One and Only (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

I know you want to flesh me Suck and then digest me Fuck and then contest me Rip and sip and test me Trying to protest me But please do not neglect me Silence or reject me Before you try and hurt me When your eyes avert me Or your friends divert me And then you all desert me Know you cannot stop me Slow my flow or top me And when you think you’ve lost me You’ll find that you’ve not cost me A thing but finally forced me To crush who wont endorse me And Standing Tall will be The one and only ME

richa 4-Sep-03/7:50 AM
the last line is a bit infantile, and destroys the flow.

Other than that it has a rather good lyrical flow, a bit like a rap song. And a rap song about the one and only me is hardly original.

But overall quite enjoyable




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