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R.O.X. (Lyric) by InvertedEar
No eye has ever dived into the sea of my emotion
But yours pierced the heart of it
Glide with me as I hold your hand
Let this current of affection pull us under.
You peeled the cynic off my chest
Wander within my soul
This passion we possess captured the beauty
Of an afternoon we both stole.
As I breeze through your words
Those glances unfiltered
A stare reflected the serenity of your smile
Whispered by a solitary heart - âIâll be here only for a while.â
Beneath masks of ambiguous tales
Sail through the images inside my head
Hand me the canvas of your thoughts
And weâll draw and weave colors as we lay in bed..
And weâll sing and pluck the strings of your guitar
Meander in my restless mind
The harmony that bonded the sharps and flats
In our music rests a love thatâs hard to find.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.285714
Weighted score: 5.345782
Overall Rank: 3413
Posted: September 3, 2003 5:05 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2003 5:05 AM PDT
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ex: And weâll draw and weave colors as we lay in bed..
gets me thinking of bed wrestling, skin blushing in arousal, rainbow hallucinations from orgasm.. shit like that.
-shrug- what were you attempting to do with this poem then?
penetration... i mean, if its not erotic, you sure got me all confused with this type of writing. that or im just an oversexed bastard.