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One goal,Gotten&Changed (Free verse) by Hostileintent
Five years ago, a promise I did make
That by eighteen, one path I would take
Eighteen now, five years gone by
And I have been offered, that path of mine
For the past five years, I have battled and fought
I have done all I can, to get what I have sought
Five years with a goal, one goal at that
That by eighteen I would be, an army cadet
Nothing else I have wanted,about nothing else I have thought
So many skills, much knowledge, information I've been taught
I have prepared myself, in every possible way
So that I'll be ready, on that faithful day
But now that I've made it, I feel really strange
For some of my feelings, have suddenly changed
Leaving is pretty hard, friends, family and more
Leaving is pretty hard, for my heart is quite sore
Isn't it strange how priorities change
You think it will fall into place, when you come of age
But no, when you get what you've wanted, your wants change
Man, how moods and needs change, utterly strange!!
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.285714
Weighted score: 5.345782
Overall Rank: 3414
Posted: September 25, 2003 10:23 AM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 10:23 AM PDT
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I think you have found your true vocation in the armed forces. A gun will lie better in your hands than a pen. Happy shooting and killing!