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ReplyTo a comment on One goal,Gotten&Changed by Hostileintent.

Edna Sweetlove29 Oct 2006

Embarrassingly badly written. The first stanza is doggerel. The use of "man" in the last line is appalling.

I think you have found your true vocation in the armed forces. A gun will lie better in your hands than a pen. Happy shooting and killing!