Re: playing the scratching game by nentwined	15-Sep-03/4:56 PM
Lawd knows I knead the hep.
Re: sitting at the cliff's edge by nentwined	15-Sep-03/4:53 PM
Ok, I'm oversurplussed on city traffic. Trade ya for that cliff? Well done. Always good to hear from the Prime Minister.
Re: My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Sep-03/4:47 PM
lapel-grab-haymaker-followthrough. not pulled. sadness+sadness=sadness
Re: missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub	7-Sep-03/5:04 PM
I overworked my fish and his eskimo a while ago. It got so bad, I had to put them both down. Don't let it happen to you.
Re: a comment on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/5:10 AM
You like making strange bedfellows, don't you.
Re: a comment on The empty room by INTRANSIT	3-Sep-03/4:58 AM
I can dig the comma. I wanted (hair) to rhyme with (there),I was trying a more subtle rhyme with this. I see what you're saying though. I'll play with it. Oh looky! No more onesies-twosies! I must be gaining the respect of someone with pertinance. Ha! OW! damn that coffee's hot!
Re: Nightshades by Bachus	27-Aug-03/3:34 PM
Maaaaan, you and them villanelles really know how to get it on!
Re: a comment on It's about truckin' by INTRANSIT	27-Aug-03/3:28 PM
Why don't you write more? It's great therapy...if nothing else.
Re: a comment on What you know by INTRANSIT	27-Aug-03/3:19 PM
damn you horus. You're too good. I hadn't even realized how much of myself I had put into this. holy fuck! thanks bro. So, was it a Monster Mash? Or mashed potatoes.
Re: Portsmouth belle 4 by Garrett S Sexton	26-Aug-03/3:07 PM
sweet. sad. dirty. opportunist.
Re: a comment on What you know by INTRANSIT	26-Aug-03/3:01 PM
I need help with the "face to face" line. any ideas?
Re: a comment on What you know by INTRANSIT	26-Aug-03/3:00 PM
yep. thanks, the eye turreting is better. obviously you're into reptile husbandry? I miss my 'guana.
Re: Laundry Day by impert&ent	26-Aug-03/6:34 AM
Change the opener. I think the rest is great.
Re: My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos	26-Aug-03/6:25 AM
I'd much rather be there than runnin' this east coast shit! Rock the house, dude! I'd love to hear n.i.w.s. ! fuck.
Re: The Better of the Sea by abecedarian	25-Aug-03/5:20 PM
I hate people who write sailing verse better than I. Grrr. I pray... I pray..... something nasty and including a great white whale. I think I've just poxed myself.lol
Re: POEMRANKER HAT - WHERES MY FREE MUG BITCH? by Don-Quixote	25-Aug-03/5:13 PM
You have quelled my grumpiness for the day. Thank you.
Re: a comment on What you know by INTRANSIT	23-Aug-03/7:45 AM
Thanks. I know there's a lot right, and a lot wrong, here. I'm on the road and gotta keep moving. I'll tweak it for adjustment at a later time.
Re: quarter-step (abridged) by richa	23-Aug-03/7:42 AM
This edges something of a marriage, to me. I would say: Just (ours).
Re: quarter-step (abridged) by richa	23-Aug-03/7:42 AM
This edges something of a marriage, to me. I would say: Just (ours).
Re: August and everyt'ing after by w~* ATHENA *~w	19-Aug-03/6:17 AM
Also, if your appetite is insatiable, why not write more?