Re: August and everyt'ing after by w~* ATHENA *~w	19-Aug-03/5:47 AM
Your style is definitely one-off. maybe two. I need more lines to "clue me in".
Re: a comment on Breaking the wind (An Odenelle to Pirgaytes) by Bachus	19-Aug-03/5:35 AM
At least you'll be laughing while the rest of us poor slobs......
Re: the secret life of eyebrows by Bill Z Bub	17-Aug-03/8:14 PM
If there's a best poet (overall) award for this site, I'd vote for you. eyebrows, HA! whodathunk.
Re: Confession of a troubled man by Hostileintent	17-Aug-03/5:17 PM
I'll come back. First read looks pretty good.
Re: missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub	17-Aug-03/4:58 PM
I like the randomly shifted lines better. Dropping the buttercup works! I don't know what perfect is, but I can't imagine it being better than this. you piss me off.
Re: drought on talkin river by richa	17-Aug-03/6:17 AM
nice bridgework.
Re: The makings of a killer by <{Baba^Yaga}>	17-Aug-03/6:15 AM
Are you already in Lompoc? Did e-mode put you there? bastards.
Re: Malaries by horus8	17-Aug-03/6:10 AM
Yes! How can p/k say your poetry is going nowhere? Honestly, I may not understand most of what you are writing, but you have no boxes. no boundaries. no rules. this is what makes you work. once people get past the wrought iron gates, you're an amusement park with the best rides. always worth the price of admittance.
Re: Malaries by horus8	16-Aug-03/5:46 PM
Like mine, this deserves a better title. do it. because I know you can.
Re: drought on talkin river by richa	16-Aug-03/5:34 PM
definitely better. i never quite make the jump from 2 to 3 though. holding score.
Re: Icecream Soul by LuckyJoe	15-Aug-03/8:36 PM
good metaphor. needs chutzpah.
Re: First Love by Mr Pig	15-Aug-03/8:35 PM
From kindergarten until mid-high, I hung on any piece of info that she might come back. She never did. I never will.
Re: The last Smurf standing by Bachus	15-Aug-03/5:02 PM
Ok you baaaaad boy. But no more freebies!
Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined	15-Aug-03/4:55 PM
Bing fucking go!
Re: whilst the bells ring by richa	15-Aug-03/6:20 AM
Time to take your turn at the top. Brilliant.
Re: Rearview mirrors by horus8	15-Aug-03/6:12 AM
Strong message. Mellow tone.
Re: Happiness & Old Age by Caducus	11-Aug-03/5:46 PM
Blue ribbons here!
Re: a comment on Maine Freeze by http://mulberryfairy	11-Aug-03/5:34 PM
now THAT would get me to go back to Maine.
Re: a comment on Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy	11-Aug-03/10:00 AM
Yes, Cheers. You might like "Tingling". It's in my archives. Feel free to snoop.
Re: a comment on The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}>	11-Aug-03/7:20 AM
You're a tough act to follow. I'm gonna try just for shoits and giggles. printing.......