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Maine Freeze (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy
Each morning, the ice is broken to free the boats
the slabs lay scattered, defeated.
At night, the freeze spreads like bacteria
into a thick, new coat of secrecy.
I remember my mother telling stories
about the icebergs in Lake Michigan
how those mountains of ice terrified her childself.
When I saw the frozen Atlantic for the first time
I could only gape in awe of its primitive power.
What a manmade way to live:
United States Coast Guard
breaking the ice each morning
for the Islanders commute to work or Wal-mart.
I stood there gazing at the captive ocean
absentmindedly holding my breath
only remembering the necessity of oxygen
when I saw those cracks, where the warmer tide
still fought to escape out from under the ice.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4664
Posted: August 10, 2003 7:47 PM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2003 7:40 AM PDT
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