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Untitled #43 (Free verse) by david
The seas, much like love, are fraught with impatience. The names tell us this, conveying awordless story, a cartographical tradition. Atlantic, Mediterranean, Caspian Sea: But unlike love, they lack the intensity. They remain without the sticky nectarine words of lovers, without any real apologies.

Up the ladder: Detox
Down the ladder: Maine Freeze

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4663
Posted: July 4, 2003 1:02 PM PDT; Last modified: July 4, 2003 1:02 PM PDT
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[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Jul-03/1:05 PM | Reply
Distinctive.
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