poemranker ::Untitled #43 by david

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 55058

Untitled #43

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Jul 2003 · 1 comment

The seas, much like love, are fraught with impatience. The names tell us this, conveying awordless story, a cartographical tradition. Atlantic, Mediterranean, Caspian Sea: But unlike love, they lack the intensity. They remain without the sticky nectarine words of lovers, without any real apologies.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 6.60 weighted 5.19 rank 4659 views 161 View voting details →

5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

1 comment

[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Jul-03/1:05 PM Reply
Distinctive.