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Detox (Other) by OneFingerAnswer
Once heated spoons Split open balloons Legs gone numb A pacifier thumb Left out in the hall He sleeps against a wall Tears on that large frame All arguments are so lame Help is a pitiful cry There comes no soft reply No words for him, this Man in his own piss I swore never to talk to you again I have signed less serious oaths in pen I meant to hear nothing more about you But now what the hell can I do? Not to leave him cold, But no I'm not sold It still breaks my heart But I need some part Pick him up by his thick arms Calm his shakes with some Lucky Charms First food in what must be days I can only hope he stays

Down the ladder: Untitled #43

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4662
Posted: June 20, 2003 3:57 AM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2003 3:57 AM PDT
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[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.102 | 20-Jun-03/6:52 AM | Reply
Read it aloud to yourself and grind off the speed bumps. They're small but will make it better to read.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Jun-03/10:25 AM | Reply
GQT
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