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Fraser Allonby Q.C. is a recipient of the poemWanker award: Likes to create fake accounts pretending to be other users. Glimpse of hope in time of war (Free verse) by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
The first British supply ship
Carrying aid to Iraq
Is slowly
Moving
Into
The southern port
Of Umm Qasr.
The Sir Galahad,
Which is carrying
Food, blankets, clothing
And fresh water,
Had been delayed
By storms
And the discovery
Of mines
The Sir Galahad,
A Royal Fleet Auxiliary Ship
From Southampton,
Had originally been due to dock
On Wednesday.
But bad weather hit
And further delays were caused
When the mines
Were found
In the channel.
They were detonated by clearance teams -
Some working with dolphins -
After being discovered
Outside areas of water
That had already been swept.
The captain of the ship
Had emptied
The vessel's rear fuel tanks
As a precaution
In case the ship was hit.
The food supplies
Are mainly rice,
Lentils, chickpeas
And water.
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Posted: March 28, 2003 6:50 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 6:50 AM PST
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