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Untitled #43 (Free verse) by david

The seas, much like love, are fraught with impatience. The names tell us this, conveying awordless story, a cartographical tradition. Atlantic, Mediterranean, Caspian Sea: But unlike love, they lack the intensity. They remain without the sticky nectarine words of lovers, without any real apologies.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Jul-03/1:05 PM
Distinctive.




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