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Rearview mirrors

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Aug 2003 · 17 comments

You suffer all fire You rise on You say we're all fine and you rise on, you rise on. I shuffle barb wire I'm that far gone My sorrow's for hire and still you rise on Rise you on. Folding skyscrapers and paper airplanes Freeway overpasses sandwiching methane Cellular mouths sell radioactive migrains and I am in no position, or mood, to explain what happened to our love. So you can go ahead, and rise on. Not that you would have come back for me anyway. If you get the chance to ever dance again to our songs refrain I hope you do in Dorothy's shoes spit shined by my pain. Break your neck to look behind and you will surely find Every face you rubbed away To give your teeth that grind. When, and if, you reach that place You sold our love to preach about I hope it reflects every promise You broke your rearview mirror to forget about.

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17 comments

[8] Lifeboatman 14-Aug-03/7:48 PM Reply
nice reeking stench of rancor... 8
[n/a] horus8 › Lifeboatman 14-Aug-03/8:13 PM Reply
YES! YES! AND I ESPECIALLY LIKE HOW I RHYMED 'ABOUT' WITH... 'ABOUT'. I thought that was just damn genius.
[9] INTRANSIT 15-Aug-03/6:12 AM Reply
Strong message. Mellow tone.
[0] Hostileintent 15-Aug-03/7:55 AM Reply
thanks for the review
[n/a] horus8 › Hostileintent 15-Aug-03/11:27 AM Reply
Indiscrete (Free shit) by A Hostess ding dong

Some say methinks I'm shit,
Paranoid to fight the, shit
The void that shits,the void who shats,
The void that preys,prays gays-
Gays first tingin the morn,
Because we porn,what those who have gone before Him,have shite.
Don't I fucking bite?
For when we are shit,
Some,He says,must shat,
That invalid wound of being a blind shite,
and for the rest of my shlife,
The megre,insignificant and wretched,
Shit...Our foolish...- Shat
are foolhardy puissant shites,
And precarious fob eachother off as shites,
Whose persona is not just yellow shite,
but also comes in green and black
basically alien shite and nigger shat
Forget their ignorance-through the leviashite,
So is it best,not to be the best, and
just don't give a shite
The distinctive,innate and innocuous,
But just..... No Ordinary shoetry
but some complex motherfuckin' shit
the only thinh hoatile aboet me and
my poetry is my teil mascara.

Sorry, I couldn't hear you.
What did you say? "This place is a zoo"
"Or pass the bag and glue?" or was it
"Have you seen my shoe?"
Or was it more like a "Hey, fuck you too"
?
[n/a] horus8 › Hostileintent 15-Aug-03/11:53 AM Reply
Poop on your face.
[10] Mr Pig 15-Aug-03/10:45 AM Reply
Very arty / eclectic. Very much in the vein of Master Jim Morrisson and I leave you a full purse of 10 sovereigns.
[9] dragonfly 15-Aug-03/10:55 AM Reply
"spit shined by my pain"...love it!
[0] Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/1:02 PM Reply
ha ha aha
you have a bad head.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/1:08 PM Reply
NO.
[n/a] horus8 › Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/3:30 PM Reply
MURDER, and once again NO.
[0] Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/1:03 PM Reply
wow your poems are really good.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/1:09 PM Reply
No.
[0] Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/1:05 PM Reply
good old horus eight
he has anal sex with his mate
once his friend is at the end
good old homo just says 'bend'

my friend horus eight
loves to masturbate
he spends his day, lookin gay
wating to fuck his mate
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/1:10 PM Reply
I have 'No' friends, so my answer has to be, no.
[0] Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/2:12 PM Reply
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall, taking head from his best friend Horus
Humpty Dumpty fell off the wall, onto the bed of this stud Horus
Humpty Dumpty was not on top,to that job he left two inch Horus

Humpty Dumpty wanted more, he was not satisfied
Humpty Dumpty was adament, he wanted a larger cock inside
Good old Horus, homo Horus, homo Horus cried
He cried all day, he wanked all night
He wanked until his dick was red and white

A year to the day, since Horus cried
It was to me that Homo Horus did confide
'I'm so pissed off, I want a cock
that's 18 long and 18 wide
I want the lads to fear the cock,
And say that I Horus, truly, am, the best ride'

I'm sorry Horus, I had to say,
Unlike you, I'm not gay
In my opinion, it would work the best
If you killed yourself, you fucking pest!
[n/a] horus8 › Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/3:12 PM Reply
Clever, but I must deny your request to mouth funnel my semen and say once again No. Denied. Veto. No luck. Nice try, but zip, nada zero. poop. You sure are in a tuss to prove to the world that you are not gay. Are you sure?