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Rearview mirrors (Lyric) by horus8 You suffer all fire
You rise on
You say we're all fine
and you rise on,
you rise on.
I shuffle barb wire
I'm that far gone
My sorrow's for hire
and still you rise on
Rise you on.
Folding skyscrapers and paper airplanes
Freeway overpasses sandwiching methane
Cellular mouths sell radioactive migrains
and I am in no position, or mood, to explain
what happened to our love.
So you can go ahead,
and rise on.
Not that you would
have come back for me
anyway.
If you get the chance
to ever dance again to
our songs refrain
I hope you do
in Dorothy's shoes
spit shined by
my pain.
Break your neck
to look behind
and you will surely find
Every face you rubbed away
To give your teeth that grind.
When, and if, you reach that place
You sold our love to preach about
I hope it reflects every promise
You broke your rearview mirror
to forget about.
Up the ladder:
R'lyeh
Down the ladder:
Flight of the Samurai
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Posted: August 14, 2003 1:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2003 1:45 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.5514903 Overall Rank: 2468 Comments:
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Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13
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14-Aug-03/7:48 PM
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nice reeking stench of rancor... 8
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> Lifeboatman
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14-Aug-03/8:13 PM
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YES! YES! AND I ESPECIALLY LIKE HOW I RHYMED 'ABOUT' WITH... 'ABOUT'. I thought that was just damn genius.
Strong message. Mellow tone.
thanks for the review
Indiscrete (Free shit) by A Hostess ding dong
Some say methinks I'm shit, Paranoid to fight the, shit The void that shits,the void who shats, The void that preys,prays gays- Gays first tingin the morn, Because we porn,what those who have gone before Him,have shite. Don't I fucking bite? For when we are shit, Some,He says,must shat, That invalid wound of being a blind shite, and for the rest of my shlife, The megre,insignificant and wretched, Shit...Our foolish...- Shat are foolhardy puissant shites, And precarious fob eachother off as shites, Whose persona is not just yellow shite, but also comes in green and black basically alien shite and nigger shat Forget their ignorance-through the leviashite, So is it best,not to be the best, and just don't give a shite The distinctive,innate and innocuous, But just..... No Ordinary shoetry but some complex motherfuckin' shit the only thinh hoatile aboet me and my poetry is my teil mascara. Sorry, I couldn't hear you. What did you say? "This place is a zoo" "Or pass the bag and glue?" or was it "Have you seen my shoe?" Or was it more like a "Hey, fuck you too" ?
Poop on your face.
Very arty / eclectic. Very much in the vein of Master Jim Morrisson and I leave you a full purse of 10 sovereigns.
"spit shined by my pain"...love it!
ha ha aha
you have a bad head.
NO.
MURDER, and once again NO.
wow your poems are really good.
No.
good old horus eight
he has anal sex with his mate once his friend is at the end good old homo just says 'bend' my friend horus eight loves to masturbate he spends his day, lookin gay wating to fuck his mate
I have 'No' friends, so my answer has to be, no.
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall, taking head from his best friend Horus
Humpty Dumpty fell off the wall, onto the bed of this stud Horus Humpty Dumpty was not on top,to that job he left two inch Horus Humpty Dumpty wanted more, he was not satisfied Humpty Dumpty was adament, he wanted a larger cock inside Good old Horus, homo Horus, homo Horus cried He cried all day, he wanked all night He wanked until his dick was red and white A year to the day, since Horus cried It was to me that Homo Horus did confide 'I'm so pissed off, I want a cock that's 18 long and 18 wide I want the lads to fear the cock, And say that I Horus, truly, am, the best ride' I'm sorry Horus, I had to say, Unlike you, I'm not gay In my opinion, it would work the best If you killed yourself, you fucking pest!
Clever, but I must deny your request to mouth funnel my semen and say once again No. Denied. Veto. No luck. Nice try, but zip, nada zero. poop. You sure are in a tuss to prove to the world that you are not gay. Are you sure?
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