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Flight of the Samurai (Free verse) by Shin-Bojangles
Dum dum... The sun is setting; the air is totally red. There is wind whipping through some VERY tall reeds. They are swaying. Suddenly, a Man walks out of the sun. He is that hot. He is a Samurai. Suddenly, he whips out his sword, (called a "Katana") and cuts ALL of the reeds. He cuts that much. He is a Samurai. All of these evil ninjas then try to kill him. They YELL and jump. All of these ninjas then get cut. Ninjas can't kill Him. He is a Samurai. Suddenly, he flies to a club. He is the BEST dancer at the club. What once cut ninja, now cuts rug. All the ladies want only Him. He is a Samurai.

Up the ladder: Rearview mirrors
Down the ladder: She Thinks Of Men Waiting

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1
Weighted score: 5.55
Overall Rank: 2469
Posted: August 11, 2002 1:44 AM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2002 1:44 AM PDT
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[10] Agemo-Z @ 142.166.108.93 | 11-Aug-02/2:35 AM | Reply
What a totally sweet Samurai. Does he have cool Samurai pants? And what about crazy hair?
[n/a] Shin-Bojangles @ | 11-Aug-02/2:43 AM | Reply
To find the answer to that, you'll have to read my much awaited sequel. :D

P.S.- I should have mentioned, while reading this piece and any of its sequels, you should be listening to either the theme from "Soul Blade", the theme from "Evangelion" or "Thunderstruck". Thanks!
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