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Rearview mirrors (Lyric) by horus8

You suffer all fire You rise on You say we're all fine and you rise on, you rise on. I shuffle barb wire I'm that far gone My sorrow's for hire and still you rise on Rise you on. Folding skyscrapers and paper airplanes Freeway overpasses sandwiching methane Cellular mouths sell radioactive migrains and I am in no position, or mood, to explain what happened to our love. So you can go ahead, and rise on. Not that you would have come back for me anyway. If you get the chance to ever dance again to our songs refrain I hope you do in Dorothy's shoes spit shined by my pain. Break your neck to look behind and you will surely find Every face you rubbed away To give your teeth that grind. When, and if, you reach that place You sold our love to preach about I hope it reflects every promise You broke your rearview mirror to forget about.

horus8 15-Aug-03/11:27 AM
Indiscrete (Free shit) by A Hostess ding dong

Some say methinks I'm shit,
Paranoid to fight the, shit
The void that shits,the void who shats,
The void that preys,prays gays-
Gays first tingin the morn,
Because we porn,what those who have gone before Him,have shite.
Don't I fucking bite?
For when we are shit,
Some,He says,must shat,
That invalid wound of being a blind shite,
and for the rest of my shlife,
The megre,insignificant and wretched,
Shit...Our foolish...- Shat
are foolhardy puissant shites,
And precarious fob eachother off as shites,
Whose persona is not just yellow shite,
but also comes in green and black
basically alien shite and nigger shat
Forget their ignorance-through the leviashite,
So is it best,not to be the best, and
just don't give a shite
The distinctive,innate and innocuous,
But just..... No Ordinary shoetry
but some complex motherfuckin' shit
the only thinh hoatile aboet me and
my poetry is my teil mascara.

Sorry, I couldn't hear you.
What did you say? "This place is a zoo"
"Or pass the bag and glue?" or was it
"Have you seen my shoe?"
Or was it more like a "Hey, fuck you too"
?




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