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R'lyeh (Haiku) by razorgrin Until stars are right
He lies in a sunken tomb
Dreaming but not dead.
Up the ladder:
Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair
Down the ladder:
Rearview mirrors
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5652175
Posted: July 11, 2002 8:41 AM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 8:41 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.5550513 Overall Rank: 2467 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80
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15-Jul-02/1:05 PM
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Listen, mister. HP Lovecraft had more talent in his right tentacle than you've got in your entire face.
Hey Razora, how ya feeling today. You want a scone. it's from the Hamptons and wrapped in about "fifteen pounds" (the weight of your left breast) of gullibility, You wanna split it with me??
A. volcanos scare me (B) i'm already clear (C) L .ron is the name of my 15 foot python, to bad he's a vegan (fucking pussy ass jungle reptile) Why can't i buy pets that kill. kill KILL... BESIDES WORSHIP THE SPOON, THE NAKED HAND CARVED NUN, and your tampon string. call me sentimental.p
There's a certain point where comments stop being about the poetry, or even any discussion at hand, and start being immature cries for attention.
Some of us skip that crap and just write poems that are immature cries for attention. P.S.- I missed the word "align" in this piece. It's a sweet word that dosn't get nearly enough use. P.P.S.- Names with apostrophes=totally awesome
P.P.P.S.-Writing about doodie in no way ever can be veiwed, or should be, as a cry for attention.
P.P.P.P.S-Jesus, Samurais, and hobbits are the really only valid poetic topics one should ever tend to dwell upon my precious.
tentacles are valid as well.
NICE!
I'm liking this one a lot!
4 more to go
I know, jew-killah. I wrote these, remember? Folks, here is a fantastic example of a gene pool needing chlorine. Why this yutz thinks he's making even a dent in my life or even my score is a question for the ages.
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