poemranker ::R'lyeh by razorgrin

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Haiku № 4009

R'lyeh

by razorgrin

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Jul 2002 · 11 comments

Until stars are right He lies in a sunken tomb Dreaming but not dead.

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11 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Jul-02/1:05 PM Reply
Listen, mister. HP Lovecraft had more talent in his right tentacle than you've got in your entire face.
[8] horus8 22-Jul-02/12:24 PM Reply
Hey Razora, how ya feeling today. You want a scone. it's from the Hamptons and wrapped in about "fifteen pounds" (the weight of your left breast) of gullibility, You wanna split it with me??
[n/a] razorgrin 22-Jul-02/1:20 PM Reply
Actually, I'm an a cup. Hardly 15 pounds. I don't like scones. If you could afford it, would you be a scientologist?
[8] horus8 26-Jul-02/1:20 PM Reply
A. volcanos scare me (B) i'm already clear (C) L .ron is the name of my 15 foot python, to bad he's a vegan (fucking pussy ass jungle reptile) Why can't i buy pets that kill. kill KILL... BESIDES WORSHIP THE SPOON, THE NAKED HAND CARVED NUN, and your tampon string. call me sentimental.p
[8] Shin-Bojangles 13-Aug-02/12:32 AM Reply
There's a certain point where comments stop being about the poetry, or even any discussion at hand, and start being immature cries for attention.

Some of us skip that crap and just write poems that are immature cries for attention.

P.S.- I missed the word "align" in this piece. It's a sweet word that dosn't get nearly enough use.

P.P.S.- Names with apostrophes=totally awesome
[8] Bachus › Shin-Bojangles 4-Jan-03/2:41 PM Reply
P.P.P.S.-Writing about doodie in no way ever can be veiwed, or should be, as a cry for attention.

P.P.P.P.S-Jesus, Samurais, and hobbits are the really only valid poetic topics one should ever tend to dwell upon my precious.
[n/a] razorgrin › Bachus 4-Jan-03/8:03 PM Reply
tentacles are valid as well.
[5] Amelia 11-Sep-02/1:15 PM Reply
NICE!
[9] Ranger 3-Jan-03/11:59 AM Reply
I'm liking this one a lot!
[0] sk8boardandpoems 25-Feb-03/3:52 PM Reply
4 more to go
[n/a] razorgrin › sk8boardandpoems 26-Feb-03/7:14 AM Reply
I know, jew-killah. I wrote these, remember? Folks, here is a fantastic example of a gene pool needing chlorine. Why this yutz thinks he's making even a dent in my life or even my score is a question for the ages.