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playing the scratching game (Free verse) by nentwined a poem is written for all to see
attend me! I comment
on others' work:
attend me!
Up the ladder:
appropriation
Down the ladder:
A Future
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.88
Posted: September 14, 2003 6:39 PM PDT; Last modified: September 14, 2003 6:39 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.8674173 Overall Rank: 282 Comments:
Oh yeah I see a little kid waving his arms around in a temper trantrum like in the store. Hehe love it.
Your comments are so constructive and thorough, you DO deserve comments in return.
But if I scratch off too many I won't win the free medium drink!
I would just like to let it be known that I have no opinions about this poem whatsoever. -5-
Lawd knows I knead the hep.
Irony is often ironic.
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Says exactally what you want it to. Short and to the point. I'm liking it, here's a ten.