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appropriation (Free verse) by nentwined
a comment dashed against the rocks of my mind spreads into waves that reverbrate into words that aren't words that were in the comment and a new idea dawns rising slowly over the ruins of the old cityline of ideas a winged creature rising from the ashes of itself to itself through itself and creating a new being gently suspended in the air

Up the ladder: The Sahu
Down the ladder: and love, an envy

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.870968
Weighted score: 6.869263
Overall Rank: 381
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST
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[8]... anonymous @ | 9-Sep-01/2:27 PM | Reply
i loved the cadance, very lulling. it draws one into your world. i applaud you.
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jul-02/3:47 PM | Reply
Phoenix gets really hot this time of year. when River died, I died.
[9] LilMsLadyPoet @ 152.163.100.135 | 11-Jul-05/9:17 AM | Reply
Truly...what do we have that is really our own? Do we not all feast upon tidbits and morseld, ingest it all, until it all mingles and becomes part of who we are...and then purge ourselves of it all upon the page?
gave it a 9.
[n/a] Jill Stockinger @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 21-Dec-20/6:40 PM | Reply
lovely!
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