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appropriation (Free verse) by nentwined

a comment dashed against the rocks of my mind spreads into waves that reverbrate into words that aren't words that were in the comment and a new idea dawns rising slowly over the ruins of the old cityline of ideas a winged creature rising from the ashes of itself to itself through itself and creating a new being gently suspended in the air

anonymous 9-Sep-01/2:27 PM
i loved the cadance, very lulling. it draws one into your world. i applaud you.




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