a comment
dashed
against the rocks of my mind
spreads into waves
that
reverbrate
into words
that aren't words
that were in the comment
and a
new idea dawns
rising slowly over the
ruins
of the old cityline of ideas
a winged creature
rising from the ashes of itself
to itself
through
itself
and creating
a new being
gently suspended
in the air
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