| Re: a comment on Blue Executioner by Caducus |
21-May-05/2:37 PM |
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Shit. I'm still trying to get on the WORST list! Until I have succeded, I cannot call myself a true poet. What of that?
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| Re: I Remembered, Upon Waking by Alizarin_Crimson |
20-May-05/6:37 AM |
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Have an Alexander Hamilton.
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| Re: Talia Eternal by Enkidu |
19-May-05/6:56 PM |
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I can't get over -birds of down-. Incredible.
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| Re: a comment on Transition by INTRANSIT |
18-May-05/7:34 PM |
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Not necessarily...I was originally thinking having the clouds dissipating would be better. Then I chickened out. Endings. My Achilles' heel.
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| Re: a comment on Transition by INTRANSIT |
18-May-05/7:18 PM |
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Is it a disappointment because the title is a bit of a giveaway maybe?
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| Re: Just a perfect day (Haiku) by ingwa |
18-May-05/6:08 PM |
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| Re: visitor by Dental Panic |
18-May-05/6:05 PM |
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Echos of my Poem on a face. But MUCH better.
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| Re: a comment on Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT |
18-May-05/1:41 PM |
A. Of course it struggles. It's walking tattered terrain you grebe.
2. He talkw with agave because he's NUTSO ! Like me.
And K. The seven is quite generous. 10-Q
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| Re: a comment on Panthera pardus by ingwa |
18-May-05/9:13 AM |
Dovina? Is there something I'm not seeing or maybe not hearing here? She says she's read before and she's being published in an anthology soon. I'm wondering how. And to you, Ingwa, I mean no harm by this. I'm trying to turn the poetry diamond to see a new
facet or flaw. Flaws, mind you, are not necessarily bad. They make each gem more identifiable.
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| Re: Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus |
17-May-05/12:19 PM |
What, may I ask, birthed the Idea for this poem?
I am not the giver of the anal retentive 5.
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| Re: Get well soon by Hallmark |
17-May-05/12:13 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Forever by Dovina |
17-May-05/12:07 PM |
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I think stanzas three and four are close enough to delete one. I also think your goal was met in stanza two. Silly pagan. Who are you to think you can be friends with a king any how?
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| Re: Learning to Drive by jessicazee |
17-May-05/12:00 PM |
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But are you Rothian or, Hagarian?
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| Re: a comment on Bookends by INTRANSIT |
17-May-05/11:52 AM |
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Oh,see? Now you've got me second guessing myself!
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| Re: I sat beside the night by Niphredil |
16-May-05/7:15 PM |
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I read them all. Have my rights as a human being been revoked? It sure feels like it.
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| Re: dit da haiku by nentwined |
16-May-05/7:04 PM |
glad to see your dad pop in and out from time to time.
look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
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| Re: a comment on Bookends by INTRANSIT |
16-May-05/6:47 PM |
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I'm sure I will have some O'Hara at some point. Thanks for giving it an eye-sweep.
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| Re: wretched by Dental Panic |
16-May-05/3:34 PM |
Judging by the quality of the poem, I'd say the only defect is the title. Welcome. keep your head about you.
Some carry Louisville Sluggers. Others, X-ray machines.
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| Re: a comment on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT |
16-May-05/1:04 PM |
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I looked for " lock-knee" Ankylosing was the closest I could find. I think this IS the ending the poem needs.
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| Re: The Observer by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
16-May-05/9:22 AM |
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You owe me two bucks for using my Rabbit hole. I'll take a discount on your book.
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