replying on Blue Executioner by Caducus
21 May 2005, 2:37 PM
Shit. I'm still trying to get on the WORST list! Until I have succeded, I cannot call myself a true poet. What of that?
on I Remembered, Upon Waking by Alizarin_Crimson
20 May 2005, 6:37 AM
Have an Alexander Hamilton.
on Talia Eternal by Enkidu
19 May 2005, 6:56 PM
I can't get over -birds of down-. Incredible.
replying on Transition by INTRANSIT
18 May 2005, 7:34 PM
Not necessarily...I was originally thinking having the clouds dissipating would be better. Then I chickened out. Endings. My Achilles' heel.
replying on Transition by INTRANSIT
18 May 2005, 7:18 PM
Is it a disappointment because the title is a bit of a giveaway maybe?
on Just a perfect day (Haiku) by ingwa
18 May 2005, 6:08 PM
Works for me.
on visitor by Dental Panic
18 May 2005, 6:05 PM
Echos of my Poem on a face. But MUCH better.
replying on Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT
18 May 2005, 1:41 PM
A. Of course it struggles. It's walking tattered terrain you grebe.
2. He talkw with agave because he's NUTSO ! Like me.
And K. The seven is quite generous. 10-Q
2. He talkw with agave because he's NUTSO ! Like me.
And K. The seven is quite generous. 10-Q
replying on Panthera pardus by ingwa
18 May 2005, 9:13 AM
Dovina? Is there something I'm not seeing or maybe not hearing here? She says she's read before and she's being published in an anthology soon. I'm wondering how. And to you, Ingwa, I mean no harm by this. I'm trying to turn the poetry diamond to see a new
facet or flaw. Flaws, mind you, are not necessarily bad. They make each gem more identifiable.
facet or flaw. Flaws, mind you, are not necessarily bad. They make each gem more identifiable.
on Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus
17 May 2005, 12:19 PM
What, may I ask, birthed the Idea for this poem?
I am not the giver of the anal retentive 5.
I am not the giver of the anal retentive 5.
on Get well soon by Hallmark
17 May 2005, 12:13 PM
OREGANO!!!
on Learning to Drive by jessicazee
17 May 2005, 12:00 PM
But are you Rothian or, Hagarian?
on I sat beside the night by Niphredil
16 May 2005, 7:15 PM
I read them all. Have my rights as a human being been revoked? It sure feels like it.
on dit da haiku by nentwined
16 May 2005, 7:04 PM
glad to see your dad pop in and out from time to time.
look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
on wretched by Dental Panic
16 May 2005, 3:34 PM
Judging by the quality of the poem, I'd say the only defect is the title. Welcome. keep your head about you.
Some carry Louisville Sluggers. Others, X-ray machines.
Some carry Louisville Sluggers. Others, X-ray machines.
replying on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT
16 May 2005, 1:04 PM
I looked for " lock-knee" Ankylosing was the closest I could find. I think this IS the ending the poem needs.
on The Observer by Jeremi B. Handrinos
16 May 2005, 9:22 AM
You owe me two bucks for using my Rabbit hole. I'll take a discount on your book.