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Learning to Drive (Free verse) by jessicazee
Our Driver’s Ed class was private, the sign under Shear Genius Hair Studio, a shanty behind Taco Bell on Lathrop Avenue where Ryan King caulked a Lite can to my dad’s T-topped Grand Prix bumper and we met twice a week. We were fifteen and a half, heavily eyelinered, one of us still a virgin. Teri’s ex-boyfriend Shane shot himself after our first drive, he was on the phone with B.B. when he did it, I heard from Misti at Pinocchio’s the same night. We thought she was joking, she laughed, said Shane is dead! Shane Peterson killed himself! We cried for her shock, she couldn’t work anymore. Our next class was a quiz, heads on desks, our first funeral just over. There was a line around the block to pay respect, at school confused graffiti on lockers, flowers in bathroom stalls, we learned how to drive that month on boulevards, backing up, grinding gears.

Up the ladder: Lost (not a poem)
Down the ladder: A Lesson

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6274
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2005 10:11 PM PDT
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[n/a] Hallmark @ 129.12.235.73 | 16-May-05/10:34 PM | Reply
I don't understand poetry very much could you explian. I I don't understand this: Our driver's Ed was private

i'm not sure about the caulking bit either as this brings to mind prehistoric ships to me.
can you help?
I'm trying to learn
[8] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 > Hallmark | 17-May-05/12:23 PM | Reply
"private" as opposed to school-sponsored.
"calked" as in glued into place with calking.
[n/a] zodiac @ 212.38.134.51 > Dovina | 18-May-05/4:14 AM | Reply
"caulking" and "caulked" are correct spellings, dummy.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.197 | 17-May-05/12:00 PM | Reply
But are you Rothian or, Hagarian?
[8] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 17-May-05/12:24 PM | Reply
Although the ending implies what you really learned through the experience, I think a more compelling comparison could be made.
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