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Just a perfect day (Haiku) (Haiku) by ingwa Hippos grunt young near
Eagle wakes, fish splash he sees
Heat, little breeze there
Up the ladder:
Come sleep with me
Down the ladder:
Haunting Dreams
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2005 3:10 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6769 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 205.188.116.72
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18-May-05/6:08 PM
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Works for me.
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ingwa @ 212.135.253.244
> INTRANSIT
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19-May-05/1:47 AM
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Intransit, thank you very much for your kind words. I'm pleased you enjoyed and thanks for reading.
doesn't work for me. I get the concept, but the flow stumbles.
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