Haiku № 125000

Just a perfect day (Haiku)

Member since 2005 · Posted 3 May 2005 · Edited 17 May 2005 · 3 comments

Hippos grunt young near Eagle wakes, fish splash he sees Heat, little breeze there

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[10] INTRANSIT 18-May-05/6:08 PM Reply

Works for me.

[n/a] ingwa › INTRANSIT 19-May-05/1:47 AM Reply

Intransit, thank you very much for your kind words. I'm pleased you enjoyed and thanks for reading.

[3] nentwined 24-May-05/4:27 PM Reply

doesn't work for me. I get the concept, but the flow stumbles.