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Just a perfect day (Haiku) (Haiku) by ingwa
Hippos grunt young near Eagle wakes, fish splash he sees Heat, little breeze there

Up the ladder: Why?
Down the ladder: garden spite

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6733
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2005 3:10 PM PDT
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[10] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.116.72 | 18-May-05/6:08 PM | Reply
Works for me.
[n/a] ingwa @ 212.135.253.244 > INTRANSIT | 19-May-05/1:47 AM | Reply
Intransit, thank you very much for your kind words. I'm pleased you enjoyed and thanks for reading.
[3] nentwined @ 64.60.192.130 | 24-May-05/4:27 PM | Reply
doesn't work for me. I get the concept, but the flow stumbles.
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