poemranker ::tumbleweed by crooked_smile

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Free verse № 122806

tumbleweed

Member since 2005 · Posted 2 Apr 2005 · 4 comments

I can see the giant tumbleweed rolling around in the dust in my brain you've just asked me a question, in Chinese, or in Latin, or Greek, it could even by Hebrew or Arabic. But how can you call this English? I understand English, English is something I can handle. Why do you confuse me with words that mean nothing, why must you ask questions you know I cannot answer? Do you like when I mess up? Do you want to see me fail? Are you trying to make all my hardwork and energy boil down to nothing but hatred?

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[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 2-Apr-05/11:46 PM Reply
"in the dust in my brain" please tell you you at least see the bad repetition?

I don't see how the first two lines really tie in at all. -7-

<3 Jason
[10] zodiac 3-Apr-05/4:15 AM Reply
موعقة انت؟
[n/a] crooked_smile › zodiac 3-Apr-05/12:08 PM Reply
very clever........
[10] zodiac › crooked_smile 4-Apr-05/10:23 PM Reply
Is that your answer?