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tumbleweed (Free verse) by crooked_smile
I can see the giant tumbleweed rolling around in the dust in my brain you've just asked me a question, in Chinese, or in Latin, or Greek, it could even by Hebrew or Arabic. But how can you call this English? I understand English, English is something I can handle. Why do you confuse me with words that mean nothing, why must you ask questions you know I cannot answer? Do you like when I mess up? Do you want to see me fail? Are you trying to make all my hardwork and energy boil down to nothing but hatred?

Up the ladder: Seven
Down the ladder: some say somewhat truth

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6734
Posted: April 2, 2005 9:50 AM PST; Last modified: April 2, 2005 9:50 AM PST
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[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 4.224.24.176 | 2-Apr-05/11:46 PM | Reply
"in the dust in my brain" please tell you you at least see the bad repetition?

I don't see how the first two lines really tie in at all. -7-

<3 Jason
[10] zodiac @ 212.118.19.51 | 3-Apr-05/4:15 AM | Reply
موعقة انت؟
[n/a] crooked_smile @ 205.188.117.69 > zodiac | 3-Apr-05/12:08 PM | Reply
very clever........
[10] zodiac @ 212.118.19.109 > crooked_smile | 4-Apr-05/10:23 PM | Reply
Is that your answer?
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