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tumbleweed (Free verse) by crooked_smile

I can see the giant tumbleweed rolling around in the dust in my brain you've just asked me a question, in Chinese, or in Latin, or Greek, it could even by Hebrew or Arabic. But how can you call this English? I understand English, English is something I can handle. Why do you confuse me with words that mean nothing, why must you ask questions you know I cannot answer? Do you like when I mess up? Do you want to see me fail? Are you trying to make all my hardwork and energy boil down to nothing but hatred?

thepinkbunnyofdoom 2-Apr-05/11:46 PM
"in the dust in my brain" please tell you you at least see the bad repetition?

I don't see how the first two lines really tie in at all. -7-

<3 Jason




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