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Just a perfect day (Haiku) (Haiku) by ingwa

Hippos grunt young near Eagle wakes, fish splash he sees Heat, little breeze there

nentwined 24-May-05/4:27 PM
doesn't work for me. I get the concept, but the flow stumbles.




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