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visitor (Free verse) by Dental Panic heâs still alive
his best work so far
a work in progress
six to eight one can
- on the closed ward -
consult the poet
blow softly on the bell
and wait
for the hurricane to answer
Up the ladder:
Fall
Down the ladder:
bonsai
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Posted: May 18, 2005 5:59 PM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2005 5:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.40529 Overall Rank: 3088 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 205.188.116.72
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18-May-05/6:05 PM
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Echos of my Poem on a face. But MUCH better.
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