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dit da haiku (Meta-Ku) by nentwined dit dit dit dit dit
long dash long dash dit dit dit
dit dit dit dit dit
Up the ladder:
Raw boy chiva
Down the ladder:
Buddy
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2005 4:16 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.1 Overall Rank: 1139 Comments:
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nentwined @ 68.232.253.181
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15-May-05/4:18 PM
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Had to get this one in for posterity, off the end of the lsat one. I'm sure someone will forgive me. Well, maybe...?
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deleted user @ 81.69.23.196
> nentwined
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15-May-05/4:28 PM
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What happened to Nature?
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deleted user @ 81.69.23.196
> deleted user
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16-May-05/4:35 AM
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Oh. Didn't see 'meta-ku'. Whatever that stands for.
S.O.S.
You're doing a great job with Poemranker, but if you expect a crowd-joining high vote for this, think again.
I expect nothing, though honestly I was starting to worry with all the high votes on other recent submissions.
glad to see your dad pop in and out from time to time.
look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
*smirk...hmmm....
I cant vote here for something that I just dont understand. This could be pure genius or feculent drivel, I have no idea. An explanation would get you at least another vote from me.
This, unsurprisingly, is exactly what everyone always says about nentwined. That's his gift and curse.
cursed, I tell you--cursed!
I think a poem has to stand on its up-front understandability, so for the purposes of rating it--if you don't understand it, trash it. That's honest. That's how much value the poem has _for you_.
But just to satisfy any curiousity you might have, read it as morse code.
I'd like to know what you honestly think of your poem.
I'd probably give it a five or a six. Cute gimmick.
Considering the varying results, it made for a worthwhile experiment. I'd give it a 1 or 10 depending on my mood. Right now I'm kinda numb so no vote yet.
lol, answer your cell phone!!! Lmao!
someone had to write it!
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