Re: Brackish by <~>	16-Jan-07/12:04 PM
I like your pen-name. It's the best thing about this twaddle.
Re: Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac	16-Jan-07/12:03 PM
What the flying fuck is "a seventy-cent hand shandy" ? Or am I missing something just to poetic for words? I assume "Snorkelling Jenny" (double LL please) is a Brechtian reference
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	16-Jan-07/12:01 PM
Much better than usual. Almost interesting in fact. Still lacking in humour though.
Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac	16-Jan-07/11:54 AM
How beat-y. 1/10
Re: good bye. by nentwined	16-Jan-07/11:53 AM
Your spelling and poetic ability are on a par with shuushit's. This is more of a weeping sore than a pimple.
Re: Smiling by Jill Stockinger	16-Jan-07/4:52 AM
Suspiciously familiar. A richly deserved zero.
Re: My daughter found at the age of 28 by Jill Stockinger	16-Jan-07/4:50 AM
I would just love to be say how great this is. But that would be a lie. It hits rock bottom in all senses except pretentiousness.
Re: Leap! by Jill Stockinger	16-Jan-07/4:49 AM
Nearly as badly written as something by Rockmage. In short, terrible.
Re: Dr Toilet's Tidal Poem by Dr Toilet	16-Jan-07/4:46 AM
Ah yes indeedy, I recognise the odour so well; it is particularly strong as it arises from the previous commentator's poetry.
Re: Push, Wipe, Flush by Dr Toilet	16-Jan-07/4:45 AM
It is not often one comes across such a beautiful piece of versification as this one. Thank fuck.
Re: On returning to a town where I used to live by Nicholas Jones	10-Dec-06/11:15 AM
If this is poetry I am a Chinaman
Re: Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones	10-Dec-06/11:15 AM
Pretentious and ill-spelled.
Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones	10-Dec-06/11:14 AM
Not very good.
Re: a comment on Edna's Video Library by Edna Sweetlove	10-Dec-06/11:13 AM
Dear Nicky: you strike me as being a total bumhole.
Re: Ode to the Bun by Stephen Robins	10-Dec-06/11:12 AM
I think you will find there are three Ts in twattish.
Re: California triolets by zodiac	10-Dec-06/11:10 AM
I thought it said "California toilets" Sorry. It would have been better thus.
Re: California triolets by zodiac	10-Dec-06/11:10 AM
I thought it said "California toilets" Sorry. It would have been better thus.
Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta	8-Nov-06/1:07 PM
There seems to be some friendly badinage I am missing out on here. The poem is crap.
Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha	8-Nov-06/1:06 PM
I have been to the baths at Lucca. They were out of soap at the time so I had to make do with a tinkle.
Re: Water Red by InWonderLand	8-Nov-06/1:03 PM
Laughably bad.