on Brackish by <~>
16 Jan 2007, 12:04 PM
I like your pen-name. It's the best thing about this twaddle.
on Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac
16 Jan 2007, 12:03 PM
What the flying fuck is "a seventy-cent hand shandy" ? Or am I missing something just to poetic for words? I assume "Snorkelling Jenny" (double LL please) is a Brechtian reference
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
16 Jan 2007, 12:01 PM
Much better than usual. Almost interesting in fact. Still lacking in humour though.
on Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac
16 Jan 2007, 11:54 AM
How beat-y. 1/10
on Smiling by Jill Stockinger
16 Jan 2007, 4:52 AM
Suspiciously familiar. A richly deserved zero.
on My daughter found at the age of 28 by Jill Stockinger
16 Jan 2007, 4:50 AM
I would just love to be say how great this is. But that would be a lie. It hits rock bottom in all senses except pretentiousness.
on Leap! by Jill Stockinger
16 Jan 2007, 4:49 AM
Nearly as badly written as something by Rockmage. In short, terrible.
on Dr Toilet's Tidal Poem by Dr Toilet
16 Jan 2007, 4:46 AM
Ah yes indeedy, I recognise the odour so well; it is particularly strong as it arises from the previous commentator's poetry.
on Push, Wipe, Flush by Dr Toilet
16 Jan 2007, 4:45 AM
It is not often one comes across such a beautiful piece of versification as this one. Thank fuck.
on On returning to a town where I used to live by Nicholas Jones
10 Dec 2006, 11:15 AM
If this is poetry I am a Chinaman
on Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones
10 Dec 2006, 11:15 AM
Pretentious and ill-spelled.
on War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones
10 Dec 2006, 11:14 AM
Not very good.
replying on Edna's Video Library by Edna Sweetlove
10 Dec 2006, 11:13 AM
Dear Nicky: you strike me as being a total bumhole.
on Ode to the Bun by Stephen Robins
10 Dec 2006, 11:12 AM
I think you will find there are three Ts in twattish.
on California triolets by zodiac
10 Dec 2006, 11:10 AM
I thought it said "California toilets" Sorry. It would have been better thus.
on California triolets by zodiac
10 Dec 2006, 11:10 AM
I thought it said "California toilets" Sorry. It would have been better thus.
on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta
8 Nov 2006, 1:07 PM
There seems to be some friendly badinage I am missing out on here.
The poem is crap.
The poem is crap.
on Bagni di Lucca by Sasha
8 Nov 2006, 1:06 PM
I have been to the baths at Lucca. They were out of soap at the time so I had to make do with a tinkle.
on Water Red by InWonderLand
8 Nov 2006, 1:03 PM
Laughably bad.