Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	31-Oct-06/4:31 PM
You may be intelligent, Al, you just hide it so well. We could have so much in common. Maybe not!
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	31-Oct-06/4:30 PM
Yes, keep it to yourself. I like Italy. I like Italians. Half castes? That's a different bucket of ravioli.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	31-Oct-06/4:28 PM
Your grammar is not good. Have you heard of the subjunctive? What's wrong with O'Neill? Moron.
Re: August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger	31-Oct-06/4:26 PM
An odd fullstop would do no one any harm, sweetie.
Re: "Twee" by Ranger	31-Oct-06/4:26 PM
Bollocks
Re: Fraser's Wedding by Stephen Robins	29-Oct-06/5:07 PM
Disappointing considering your track record.
Re: Brackish by <~>	29-Oct-06/5:05 PM
Deeply boring and pretentious. Over-punctuated and empty.
Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	29-Oct-06/5:02 PM
It "kinda" makes me want to puke, "kinda", like.
Re: The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	29-Oct-06/5:01 PM
More illiterate crud.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	29-Oct-06/5:01 PM
You appear to be fucking demented. I don't know which peasanty part of the world you dwell in. I assume the US of Shite; please do me a favour (note the spelling, dumbass) and don't read any more of my intellectual pieces. Also note that "your" is different from "you're". Jesus, where were you colonials educated? Go and watch Fox News and support your murderous troops as they slaughter Iraqi babies and cheer as they come home piecemeal in bags.
Re: Jesus in a leisure suit by Imago	29-Oct-06/4:43 AM
This shows promise especially the references to the horrible car you drive. What a pity it is wrecked by these hideous lines... "to where I wanna be But my mind is floating off the berm" Why use a non-word like "wanna"? And what does a raised river bank have to do with it?
Re: Fascists by Imago	29-Oct-06/4:40 AM
Trite. You probably don't even know what a fascist is. I shall be generous for a change: 1/10
Re: a comment on One goal,Gotten&Changed by Hostileintent	29-Oct-06/4:38 AM
Oh yes and the word "gotten" is cringeworthy too!
Re: One goal,Gotten&Changed by Hostileintent	29-Oct-06/4:37 AM
Embarrassingly badly written. The first stanza is doggerel. The use of "man" in the last line is appalling. I think you have found your true vocation in the armed forces. A gun will lie better in your hands than a pen. Happy shooting and killing!
Re: Vote Goats by ALChemy	29-Oct-06/4:34 AM
Well, this poem is very badly written. It also contains poor grammar and syntax. And the primordial slime bit is a bit over the top. I am tempted to give it 0/10 just out of bitchiness but that would be unfair as it holds a kernel of truth in its clumsiness. So 5/10. You can't say fairer than that now can you, Al, dearie?
Re: The world's shortest poem by ALChemy	29-Oct-06/4:32 AM
Not short enough. It is wonderful to find someone who writes a two word poem AND ONE OF THEM IS SPELLED WRONGLY! An unbeatable achievment.
Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	27-Oct-06/4:32 PM
Utterly terrible. Total defecation. 10/10 for a good laugh!
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	27-Oct-06/4:31 PM
A combination of pretentiousness and ignorance. Boring too! I'll be generous and score it 4/10, no silly me 2/10.
Re: Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom	27-Oct-06/4:29 PM
A bit of punctuation would have done no harm. But it's OK I suppose. Noy exactly profound that last line, is it?
Re: a comment on Gracy (An ode to my greyhound) by mindsigns	18-Oct-06/1:10 PM
Much better!