replying on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove
31 Oct 2006, 4:31 PM
You may be intelligent, Al, you just hide it so well. We could have so much in common. Maybe not!
replying on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove
31 Oct 2006, 4:30 PM
Yes, keep it to yourself. I like Italy. I like Italians. Half castes? That's a different bucket of ravioli.
replying on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove
31 Oct 2006, 4:28 PM
Your grammar is not good. Have you heard of the subjunctive? What's wrong with O'Neill? Moron.
on August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger
31 Oct 2006, 4:26 PM
An odd fullstop would do no one any harm, sweetie.
on Fraser's Wedding by Stephen Robins
29 Oct 2006, 5:07 PM
Disappointing considering your track record.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy
29 Oct 2006, 5:02 PM
It "kinda" makes me want to puke, "kinda", like.
on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy
29 Oct 2006, 5:01 PM
More illiterate crud.
replying on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove
29 Oct 2006, 5:01 PM
You appear to be fucking demented. I don't know which peasanty part of the world you dwell in. I assume the US of Shite; please do me a favour (note the spelling, dumbass) and don't read any more of my intellectual pieces. Also note that "your" is different from "you're". Jesus, where were you colonials educated? Go and watch Fox News and support your murderous troops as they slaughter Iraqi babies and cheer as they come home piecemeal in bags.
on Jesus in a leisure suit by Imago
29 Oct 2006, 4:43 AM
This shows promise especially the references to the horrible car you drive.
What a pity it is wrecked by these hideous lines...
"to where I wanna be
But my mind is floating off the berm"
Why use a non-word like "wanna"? And what does a raised river bank have to do with it?
What a pity it is wrecked by these hideous lines...
"to where I wanna be
But my mind is floating off the berm"
Why use a non-word like "wanna"? And what does a raised river bank have to do with it?
replying on One goal,Gotten&Changed by Hostileintent
29 Oct 2006, 4:38 AM
Oh yes and the word "gotten" is cringeworthy too!
on One goal,Gotten&Changed by Hostileintent
29 Oct 2006, 4:37 AM
Embarrassingly badly written. The first stanza is doggerel. The use of "man" in the last line is appalling.
I think you have found your true vocation in the armed forces. A gun will lie better in your hands than a pen. Happy shooting and killing!
I think you have found your true vocation in the armed forces. A gun will lie better in your hands than a pen. Happy shooting and killing!
on Vote Goats by ALChemy
29 Oct 2006, 4:34 AM
Well, this poem is very badly written. It also contains poor grammar and syntax. And the primordial slime bit is a bit over the top. I am tempted to give it 0/10 just out of bitchiness but that would be unfair as it holds a kernel of truth in its clumsiness.
So 5/10. You can't say fairer than that now can you, Al, dearie?
So 5/10. You can't say fairer than that now can you, Al, dearie?
on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy
29 Oct 2006, 4:32 AM
Not short enough.
It is wonderful to find someone who writes a two word poem AND ONE OF THEM IS SPELLED WRONGLY! An unbeatable achievment.
It is wonderful to find someone who writes a two word poem AND ONE OF THEM IS SPELLED WRONGLY! An unbeatable achievment.
on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!
27 Oct 2006, 4:32 PM
Utterly terrible. Total defecation. 10/10 for a good laugh!
on The Pitâs Bottom by Dovina
27 Oct 2006, 4:31 PM
A combination of pretentiousness and ignorance. Boring too! I'll be generous and score it 4/10, no silly me 2/10.
on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom
27 Oct 2006, 4:29 PM
A bit of punctuation would have done no harm. But it's OK I suppose. Noy exactly profound that last line, is it?
replying on Gracy (An ode to my greyhound) by mindsigns
18 Oct 2006, 1:10 PM
Much better!