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"Twee"

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Sep 2006 · 16 comments

Affectedly pretty, dainty and quaint Give me your soul and I'll give you a saint

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[8] nypoet22 30-Sep-06/6:52 AM Reply
*chuckles*
[n/a] Ranger › nypoet22 30-Sep-06/6:54 AM Reply
;-)

-Thanks must also go at this point to the Collins Concise English Dictionary.
[7] Dovina 30-Sep-06/11:27 AM Reply
Frankly, I don't understand you on this one. If she is affectedly pretty and cute, as opposed to actually pretty, then why would you, a saint, want to give yourself to her? Probably, there is something I am missing here. I had to look up "twee" a briticism that I may be misinterpreting. Or maybe it's a sly way of saying you are not a saint.
[n/a] Ranger › Dovina 30-Sep-06/12:30 PM Reply
It's not supposed to be particularly meaningful. The first line is more or less the definition of 'Twee', the second is just about the most twee phrase I could think of. Put them together, and you have a couplet which defines and exemplifies the word. A bit of fun, nothing more.

Also, it's the sinners - not the saints - who get the pretty ones.
[9] lmp › Dovina 5-Jun-07/9:32 AM Reply
i think i can see a particularly tasty meaning if we consider that a bishop may become a saint. giving a pretty, dainty, and quaint thang the "bishop"... well, maybe she would be giving up her soul, if you believe the church.
[8] half.italian 30-Sep-06/8:19 PM Reply
I like it.
[8] Fayt 30-Sep-06/11:19 PM Reply
I like this, its fun.

^_^
[7] LilMsLadyPoet 1-Oct-06/4:04 PM Reply
...Then we'll be a couple quite faint.
...Don't expect more than you ain't.
LOL...
Cute little ditty:)
[n/a] Ranger › LilMsLadyPoet 1-Oct-06/4:27 PM Reply
Faint heart never won fair maid, huh? ;-)
[7] pete 2-Oct-06/3:35 PM Reply
multilayered bit of fun...is it deep....is it ironic ...surely not cynical... a comment on the human condition or aspiration...i give up... enjoyed reading it though :)
[5] nentwined 4-Oct-06/6:30 PM Reply
Hmmzor.
[n/a] Ranger › nentwined 5-Oct-06/3:36 PM Reply
Hurdle
[8] Lola 11-Oct-06/1:39 AM Reply
Weird but cute.
[0] Edna Sweetlove 31-Oct-06/4:26 PM Reply
Bollocks
[n/a] Ranger › Edna Sweetlove 1-Nov-06/1:39 AM Reply
She can have my bollocks too. After all, the foundation of traditional marriage is 'what's mine is yours'.
[9] lmp 5-Jun-07/9:33 AM Reply
i like the naughty and funny meaning that can be read into this.