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The Unseen

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 May 2004 · 11 comments

Youâre killing me Killing me inside But you canât see it Because youâre blind Youâre tearing me to pieces Tearing apart my soul But you canât see it Your hearts too cold So I abide here All alone in my room Contemplating ways that I Could end this doom Ways to disengage This pain Iâm feeling Sharp razor blades Are my way of dealing But this you'll never recognize Because all that you can see Are ways to please yourself As I carry on the unseen.

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[4] zodiac 15-May-04/8:40 AM Reply

You're a very naughty girl, cuddlytiger.

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › zodiac 15-May-04/11:37 AM Reply

i know...:/

[4] zodiac › cuddlytiger17 15-May-04/12:04 PM Reply

Perhaps what attracts you to cutting is that it is so sexy and it lets out the beauty thats hidden inside you. Let me ask you, do you look like this?

http://tinyurl.com/254qo

Or this?

http://tinyurl.com/3fxya

Or this?

http://tinyurl.com/39hgg

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › zodiac 15-May-04/2:21 PM Reply

thats none of ur business, plz dont mock me...

[4] zodiac › cuddlytiger17 15-May-04/2:39 PM Reply

Okay, look, I'm sorry for making fun of you in the past, and I've really not been trying to do that here. I do have some idea what it's like living in an abusive parental (or foster parental) situation, but cutting is a supremely awful way of dealing with it. And even if there is a real psychological disorder that compels people to mutilate their bodies, I can assure you that you don't have it. In fact, I don't think you really are a cutter (none of the people who've claimed to be on this site in the past have really been,) but whether you are or not it's a serious, crazy thing to be bandying around in this fashion. Buck up, kid. You'll be 18 and away from that house in no time - even though at this point I'm absolutely sure it feels like forever.
-zodiac

[1] Sasha 15-May-04/4:57 PM Reply

This is quite sick.

I'm sorry you have to deal with this.

And zodiac, those pictures were absolutely disgusting, did you really have to?

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › Sasha 15-May-04/6:05 PM Reply

why are u sorry? u havent done anything...

[1] Sasha › cuddlytiger17 15-May-04/6:13 PM Reply

Pity- the same sort of pity I felt when first reading your poetry- only more so.

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › Sasha 15-May-04/6:43 PM Reply

dont pity me...its a waste of time, definately not worth it.

[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-May-04/11:43 PM Reply

Allow your eye to do the only bleeding you cause yourself. Tears work so much better...

Trust me I know...
I almost married a "cutter"

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[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › thepinkbunnyofdoom 22-May-04/7:17 PM Reply

Sumtimes tears just aren't enuff...Thanks for the advice tho...