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The Unseen (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

You’re killing me Killing me inside But you can’t see it Because you’re blind You’re tearing me to pieces Tearing apart my soul But you can’t see it Your hearts too cold So I abide here All alone in my room Contemplating ways that I Could end this doom Ways to disengage This pain I’m feeling Sharp razor blades Are my way of dealing But this you'll never recognize Because all that you can see Are ways to please yourself As I carry on the unseen.

Sasha 15-May-04/6:13 PM
Pity- the same sort of pity I felt when first reading your poetry- only more so.




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