| Re: Pump the Guns by oddgreenout |
18-Oct-06/1:09 PM |
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| Re: snot by fattony |
18-Oct-06/1:08 PM |
This showed considerable promise until that 4th line.
I suggest the last line should read:
"in the matted nose hairs i clipped so short"
And you spell nostril with an "i", dearie.
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| Re: Young Dead Flesh by Harry Hunt |
18-Oct-06/1:05 PM |
Quite amusing
But confusing
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| Re: Let's Grovel For Jesus And Fight The Naughty Satan! by Sing4Jesus! |
18-Oct-06/1:03 PM |
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Howlingly funny! I love this!
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| Re: Let's Do a Test by GAC |
18-Oct-06/1:01 PM |
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not so gooding? You must have been desperate for a rhyme, dearie. 0/10 again.
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| Re: Waiting for the Doctor by GAC |
18-Oct-06/1:01 PM |
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Brilliant rhyme scheme. 0/10 and count yourself lucky I'm feeling generous.
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| Re: Fifty if Nifty by GAC |
18-Oct-06/1:00 PM |
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This will make 'em roll in the aisles down at your local tabernacle.
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| Re: a comment on PURPLE COWS by GAC |
18-Oct-06/12:59 PM |
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You certainly need an enema. You're dead right there, dear.
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| Re: PURPLE COWS by GAC |
18-Oct-06/12:58 PM |
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About as funny as the last outbreak of the Black Death.
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| Re: One Nation Under God by GAC |
18-Oct-06/12:57 PM |
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This is truly, sickeningly, repellently awful. One nation under God? Are you crazy? America is a racial mish-mash, a mixture of demented bible-thumping creationist Christians, aggressive psychopathic ill-educated redneck patriots and sentimental sloppy hypocrites. And those are the better Americans!
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| Re: Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5 |
17-Oct-06/7:01 AM |
This poem has been posted twice. This copy is just as applalling as the first posting.
Sickening.
Israel is a rogue usurping state, hated by all except the Americans.
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| Re: Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5 |
17-Oct-06/6:59 AM |
ISRAEL
Land of broken promises
Land stolen from the Palestians
Land of liars, crooks and murderers
Land supported by the Yanks
Land hopefully to disappear from the map
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| Re: Crappy by drnick |
17-Oct-06/6:57 AM |
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Puerile. Unamusing. Not witty. Not clever. Badly punctuated. And those are some of the better aspects.
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| Re: Lady Bradburyâs Excursion by Dovina |
17-Oct-06/6:55 AM |
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Doughnut, dear. "Donut" is the brand name.
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| Re: Left the key in dream den's door by capachijim |
17-Oct-06/6:54 AM |
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Not impressed; clumsy wording and a limp punchline. Could have been worse. Could have been illiterate!
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| Re: a comment on Cassius by helenwales |
11-Oct-06/5:17 PM |
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| Re: Cassius by helenwales |
11-Oct-06/5:16 PM |
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Yes I like sex with pussies 2.
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| Re: The Grand Adjustment by horus8 |
11-Oct-06/5:15 PM |
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Long-winded overbearing pseudo-illiterate TWADDLE
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| Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 |
11-Oct-06/5:14 PM |
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pretentious - what a surprise!
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| Re: Confession of a troubled man by Hostileintent |
11-Oct-06/5:12 PM |
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If you like doggerel, this is the one 4 U.
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