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Cassius

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Sep 2004 · 7 comments

Hot fur, a black slip of satin back, Eyes narrowed and teeth and claw keen, Through shutted dark yellow fire orb stares, Rippled spine of straightening sheet, You're waiting. Take or leave it, cold as ice, The vibration luring the scratch depart, Hot on my thigh your grinning jaw with distained sparse forest smiles, I care hiss he with shivering potential, Straightened finger tipped crescent moon, And fulfilled with desires all, For tonight he will accept.

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[8] Dovina 23-Sep-04/4:41 PM Reply

Too vague, but I like the first and last lines.

[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 24-Sep-04/2:33 AM Reply

You appar to like the phrases "ice cold" and "cold as ice". I can well understand why. Other than ice, it's quite difficult to think of something cold, isn't it?

[n/a] Stephen Robins › wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 27-Sep-04/5:07 AM Reply

Wazzook

[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w › Stephen Robins 27-Sep-04/5:23 AM Reply

Do you mean "wazzock"? Or have you invented a new word?

[8] Edna Sweetlove › wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 11-Oct-06/5:17 PM Reply

How about a nun's cunt?

[6] Petit Robinet 11-Oct-06/6:05 AM Reply

You know what it is to have a bite of pussycat in your bedridden-nudity alleged Helen of Wales?

A pussycat in the bed makes for a poem, but not of âpotentialâ. It is a DANGER. Material NOT "potential".

See to them my scars? Look at my scars!

Try stronger. Je te donne des SIX.

[8] Edna Sweetlove 11-Oct-06/5:16 PM Reply

Yes I like sex with pussies 2.